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In this section, you will share your texts about "News Report", where you will have to express your comments about the topic and story you read.
Remember I'll be reading your texts. I'll also share the link with your friends from other classes so they can read your excellent texts đ!
Enjoy and leave your texts in the comments with your name. đđ
I´ll be reading your pieces of writing here, as well as your classmates.
ReplyDeleteMs. Patty
Dear students:
DeleteThanks for the great work you are doing. Later I´ll be checking the mistakes. The idea is that all of you can learn from the others´ mistakes to continue your learning process.
Thanks for the effort!!
Good evening, this is Girouette News and you are being informed. Yesterday, March 21, (via online) the cinema award was given to Dario Sabatini, because of the incredible work he made directing the movie White Chicks. Reviews are saying that this movie have one of the best casts on the filming world and is being said that the special effects are amazing!
ReplyDeleteThe official ceremony will be held next Friday, and the trophy will be given that same day. Is being said that this trophy costs around 2 million dollars and it will be awarded by the record Guinness for being the most expensive trophy made on the world!
The company of the awards has been told that Dario is thinking of selling the trophy and giving the money to children from Africa, he is so kind!
This is the end of the transmission, have a good night.
Dario sabatini
Congrats Dario for 3 reasons. First for the award given to you, second for being the first one to publish your writing, third for being so generous.
ReplyDeleteHere you have the correction so everyone can learn and we can continue our learning process:
IT is being said / this movie HAS / IN the (filming) world
Now, your classmates should read your excellent piece of writing, write their comments and upload theirs.
Don´t forget to write your names at the end!!
ReplyDeleteLadies and gentlemen, good afternoon. This is an informal news web channel, and you are soon to be informed about today's web perspective. A new online forum of questionable rigorousness that has been said to be a vanguardist story addressing platform was spotted yesterday, thus joining the plethora of its variety that seems to emerge with each day new. However, this particular one has been set at the very center of the hurricane by an enraged crowd of internet users. While most of the sites that tend to spread inaccurate information stay attached to the traditional maneuvering of publishing half-truths to appear reliable, this website was catapulted to the fame when one of its articles was found by a larger media producer. When first read, the article (which states that Dario Sabatini was awarded for his participation in the realization of the film “white chicks”) does not call our attention in any way, as it appears perfectly normal. Nevertheless, once one finishes reading it becomes clear that the writer is also Dario Sabatini. Furthermore, the piece appears to have been published by the awarded too. And if that was not sufficient, the report was released on March 20, while declaring that Mr. Sabatini received his prize on March 21. The agreement amongst the critics is, that whilst Mr. Sabatini may have not received an academy award, he might surely be nominated to some comedy award.
ReplyDeleteTomĂĄs Pucheu
Excellent writing! Excellent grammar (use of Passive), vocabulary and spelling. I liked how you took Dario´s to write yours.
ReplyDeleteCongrats TomĂĄs!
Ms. Patty
Good evening, this is BBC World. One of our most exciting news today is that tomorrow the Nobel Prizes are going to be awarded. The ceremony will be held in Stockholm like every year and it will award the outstanding contributions to humanity that have been recently made by different people in the areas of chemistry, literature, physics and medicine. Simultaneously, in Oslo, Norway the Peace Prize is going to be given in a separate ceremony. A lot of people dream about being awarded this prize, so prestigious. We hope you are as excited as we are to watch the ceremony, to see the people to which the Noble will be awarded. But to contain the excitement we are going to give some interesting facts about the Nobel through the years. Did you know that the largest number of prizes is held by the Curie family, with three prizes, two held by Marie Curie, one of them shared with her husband, and the other by their daughter? Or that the youngest person to receive the Nobel was Malala Yousafzai in 2014 at the age of nineteen years old? Quite amazing, isn’t it?
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Really amazing Miranda. You are right.
ReplyDeleteYou writing is great!!
Go on like this!
I recommend to search interesting things to read on this blog.
Take care.
Ms. Patty
Hello and welcome to News Radio. Today, a mysterious murder of the father of a family was discovered today on Avenue Street. The street and surroundings were closed. The neighbours were being questioned by the police, especially those in the house across the street, since they had had a problem a few years ago. The two children are already older. One of 30 and another of 27. The minor of the children is suspected, since it is believed that the documents he was working on were given to the wrong address by the father. Progress may be reported here on Radio News. Among other news, last week the Oscar award was given to a female director after many years. She has announced on social networks that the private ceremony will be held tomorrow, Saturday, to which the reporters are attentive. And before we leave, a curious fact related to the world of cinema: One thing we did not know about Ben Stiller is that one of the hypnosis-based therapies was assisted by him to treat a curious addiction: he could not stop the delicious M & M's chocolates, since the day consumed almost half a kilo of these sweets. We hope you liked this news section and that you enjoy your afternoon. Goodbye!
ReplyDeleteSofĂa Baranda
Well done SofĂa!!
DeleteTo learn from the mistakes:
DeleteThe YOUNGEST of the children
SUSPICIOUS since the day?
Good evening and welcome to “the pandicorns” radio! Today we have a very important piece of news to share. It was given to us by a fan of Emma Watson. Yesterday at seven in the morning, a box of kittens was found in the middle of the Golden Gate Bridge, miraculously Emma Watson was there and she decided to take the cats with her. Emma commented on her social media that the cats are fine but that she can’t keep them for a long time. She also said that she couldn't believe that someone would leave such beautiful kittens in the middle of a bridge. Finally, there is going to be an event next Saturday in the beachwood cafe and the cats will be the protagonists. It will be held to find new owners for them if you’d like to participate. Thanks for listening and stay tuned for more information.
ReplyDeleteEloisa Susacasa
Very good writing Eloisa! However, you forgot to use the Passive Voice in different tenses.
DeleteGood night to all who are seeing us, we are going to start with a big news, celebrating a special day because today a Nobel Prize has been given to Malala Yousafai, the Nobel Price of Peace, Congratulations! Knowing all you have done, we knows you deserve it. But we have to change the topic to a mystery story, the United Kingdom royal family have lost their kittens, but they were found in a box in the other side of the city, we don´t know how they arrived there, and the authorities in charge have no clue... Now we must continue with an accident that happened in the city Zoo this morning, the monkeys have scaped and a lot of cars were attacked by them. What a problem, but continuing with other news the most dangerous and searched criminal has been arrested a few minutes ago, in the city prison, his luggage has been found by the police, and is being checked, because it could have dangerous stuff. And before saying goodbye we have a last news, the city public hospital has received money for maintenance. Now is the time to go, goodbye everyone!!! See you soon.
ReplyDelete-Raimundo CĂĄceres
Very good work Raimundo!!
DeleteLearn from the few mistakes:
Who are WATCHING us a big news : important news
we know have Escaped the last news
Hello and welcome to LG Radio! today we will be broadcasting the most leading news of the hour. This afternoon criminal Steven Stevens has been arrested by the police, he will be judged on Sunday morning and is being charged of homicide, but there are rumors that the trial may be delayed because of the coronavirus outbreak. In other news, a 50-year-old woman´s car was attacked by monkeys this morning, the monkeys escaped the zoo that was near the woman house and were attracted to the car´s red color, they are being taken back to the zoo right, the woman said that to windows have been broken and the car must be taken the mechanic but she´s glad the monkeys didn´t get hurt. We hope you enjoyed today’s news report, stay tuned for more amazing news. We´ll be right back!
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Excellent Work SofĂa! Congrats!
DeleteGood evening and welcome to Santiago News. Yesterday a huge donation was given by the famous Singer Paloma Mami. The money will be donated to childrend living at Sename. ”I will also give a private concert to them”, is committed by the artist, in relation to a karaoke meeting that will be held between Paloma Mami and Daddy Yankee with one hundred kids and teens. Paloma’s manager said that the amount of money that will be given is saved at the National Bank and the check is being carried by her, until yesterday. One hundred million pesos have to be transfered from Paloma’s bank acount to the Sename’s donation ark on one explicit condition imposed by the singer: “Children at Sename must be treated kindlly and respectfully, otherwise the money may be taken back. I hope that my cause will be joint by many other artists like Daddy”
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Very good work Vale! I liked the way you dealt with different news stories.
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Hello and welcome to La girouette radio. In today´s broadcast we will talk about the most important news from the past week. A suspicious bag was found in the middle of the LAX airport in Los Angeles on Wednesday, the past week. Before being dropped, the luggage was being carried by a middle-aged white man. The red bag was dropped by the man just before entering the security control at 9.30 AM, and it wasn´t until 11:30 AM that it was noticed by airport security. Following the policy, the airport had to go on lockdown, nobody goes in, and nobody goes out. Later they would find out this was all for nothing because the bag had been laying there for 2 hours and suspect had left the airport as soon as he dropped the bag. After the airport was locked down a specialized in defusing bombs S.W.A.T team arrived at the scene. Imagine the surprise they got when they opened the bag and saw a bomb programmed to explode at 12:30. The bomb was being defused while the camera footage was being revised. One week later the culprit has been arrested by the FBI and the trial is being programed.
ReplyDeleteEven do airport security made a mistake at responding so late to this emergency, the quick action of the S.W.A.T team was able to defuse the bomb rapidly saving the life of hundreds.
-Ana Pardo
Ana, a very good news report. Excellent use of the Passive. Well done.
DeleteJust a few mistakes to learn from:
lying use last week instead of the past week even though
ReplyDeleteGood evening and welcome to CDF news.
Saturday 21st, march. This date will be kept by all fronton fans, because today, the first fronton world cup final was being released.
The tournament who was ordered for many years, has ended in an incredible way. Chile has been the champion of the world after defeating Italy, who was the favorite to win the competition. For many spectators, this game was the best of the tournament, and that it was the best Gonzalo Burgos match in his entire career, who has also been chosen as the Most Valuable Player of the championship. The coach of the champion team, Osvaldo NoviĂłn, has been told that the team has given everything in the court, and that the first place has been deserved. The next Fronton World Cup will be held in four more years, so Novion’s team has a lot of time to celebrate with their trophy, and they will be remembered forever as the first world champion of fronton.
Emilio Ferrera
Very good writing Emilio! I like your decision of taking known people to be in the news report.
DeleteJust a few mistakes:
The tournament THAT / WHICH
And that was, not that IT was
Good evening, this is Cinema and Theatre Magazine and today we will be discussing about the triumph of the tragic romance film “Call me by your name” at the Oscars Academy Awards. The ceremony was held in the beautiful and charming Los Angeles, California, last week.
ReplyDeleteThe movie of the year award was granted to the film, and the actor of the year award was given to Timothée Chalamet, one of the stars of the movie. Timothée has become the new revelation in the film industry since this movie was released. The soundtrack also has been awarded with a special prize.
The director, Luca Guadagnino and the cast were very honored to receive these awards, specially Armie Hammer, costar of the movie, who was proud of his very close friend, Timothée.
This was Katia Fajnzylber´s review of today. Thanks for reading and stay tuned for more news to come.
Excellent Katia!
DeleteIt looks very real.
Good evening and welcome to the i-suspect radio. Today we are going to read a story that was
ReplyDeletesent to us by an anonymous person. "A mistake was made. A box full of kittens was given to me
by some unexpected new members of my neighborhood. They were not actually been given to
me (the kittens), but J and A (the neighbors) have been mistreating the animals, so one day i
woke up and thought ¡this will be handled my way! The kittens must be found. The next mornig i
made sure J and A were out of the house, then i walked inside trying to find those poor animals,
and the next thing i know is that i am in my home with 6 kittens." Wow, that´s an amazing
rescue story, we would like to hear how it goes on the future. Thank you for listenig to the story,
¡see you later!
Laura Goldzveig
Excellent use of the Passive Laura!
DeleteDon´t forget that the pronoun I is always in capital letter and the exclamation mark goes only at the end.
I knEw / I WAS in my home / IN the future /
listeniNg
News Report
ReplyDeleteHello and welcome to BBC News,
for today's news we moved to Los Angeles where an obsessed fan of Ariana Grande bypassed security at her LA house.
The property was trespassed by a fan of Ariana Grande on Saturday afternoon. The security sistem of the house was evade by the man in his twenties and the front door was knock at 2pm.. The law enforcement agencies told that he talked to a property manager who answered the door before the police were called.
The police found him near the property.One of the cops was spat by him. He was found with a love note that also included directions to her house. He was arrested for the fact of trespassing and in relation to the spitting. Ariana had been victin of a fake 911 call at her Los Angeles home two weeks ago.
Bruna De la Barra
Very good report Bruna!
DeleteCongrats!
Pay attention to these mistakes:
system / was evaded / was knocked
Good morning dear friends and welcome to a new edition of La Girouette News.
ReplyDeleteToday we are here to tell you that the next cold season it's going to be accompanied by warm news: a group of entrepreneurs has announced that a virtual tea shop will be opened.
The different varieties and combinations of this infusion may be chosen from the catalog that will be in displayed on the website. However, it will also be available the possibility of obtaining blends that have been created in a personalized way.
This shop will offer a delivery service so that customers receive the products that have been selected, or that the tea is collected in a mailbox.
Perhaps one of the formats that will become the favorite of many is the individual presentation for with which you can try a mixture that can be improved before ordering a larger quantity.
The blends can be labeled with the name chosen by the client who has invented it, with the additional option of sharing it on the website, so it can be tasted by other customers.
Oh, yes! We can't stop informing you that the shop will be called 'Tea Mate' and we are still waiting for its official opening date to be published.
Tea lovers will be attentive!
Elisa Gac
Great work Elisa! I liked the way you developed the news stories.
DeleteMistakes:
... season IS going / for with?
Hello and welcome to “Instant news” radio. This afternoon a big fire burned down a theater downtown. Luckily it was closed and there was nobody inside. The theater was built in 1945 and has been used as a filming location in some movies. It seems that the fire was intentional, and the police is looking for suspects. Thanks to an incredible donation made by an anonymous celebrity the theater will be rebuilt. In other news, yesterday a box with kittens was found in a park near the train station, a couple is taking care of them, but they can’t keep all six of them, so if you’re interested in adopting one, please contact the number on our website. That is all for today thank you so much for listening and we expect you next week.
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Great SofĂa! Congratulations!
DeleteHello and welcome to a new edition of the Yew Nork Times. Today we have a new that went around the world. In Asuncion, the capital of Paraguay a man who wanted to know his favorite footballer Ronaldinho, (who was detained for using a false passport) committed a crime on purpose for seeing him. The man has been arrested this morning for 5 years and a day. The man had been quoted to his sentence yesterday and when he had to defend himself in the court he declared: “Yes, I’m guilty, I’m guilty for loving Ronaldinho and I’don’t care about the damage I did”. The most impressive thing about this new , is that this man didn’t knew in which penitentiary center was being arrested Ronaldinho. This man has been derived to “Tacumbu”penitentiary center while his idol Ronaldinho has been stayed all the month of March in “La Esperanza” penitentiary center. Thank you for reading until the end and see you soon in the next edition!
ReplyDeleteMartĂn Salvatierra Paut
Very good work, MartĂn!!
DeleteLearn from these mistakes:
A news STORY / who was ARRESTED /
SUMMONED: quoted has another meaning / didn´t knOw /
has been staying
Good evening citizens of La Girouette, this is your favorite (and only) news reporter, Mateo SuĂĄrez. Today we are celebrating ten years since seven cats were rescued from his owner, who hit them daily. In a few minutes we are going to talk to the woman whose car was attacked by chimps. Yesterday the famously known “Mike Hawk” a.k.a. The Keywords Maniac had been seen out of jail, it seems like he found a secret way out behind the kitchen walls, close your windows and doors because he had been seen going towards “Mar del sur”, the police haven’t catch him yet because they are busy in confronting his own people. In other news, tomorrow will be the fundraising event made by myself for giving poor people a place to comfortably live, eat and rest. That’s it for today’s edition of “The Best Reporter, Not Like Dario”.
ReplyDeleteMateo SuĂĄrez
DeleteMateo, I like the way you played with Dario´s report! Excellent work!
haven´t CAUGHT
Hello ladies and gentelmen, and welcome to Radio Cooperativa, now, you´re going to listen the ultimate breaking news: yesterday at 16:00 p.m a family was having lunch in the state of Nevada, when suddenly a lion was found in the house, yes, A LION! Now we´re calling to the 36-year-old mother of the family, Karen Fernandes. -Hi Karen, welcome to the program, how are you?
ReplyDelete-Terrified... now i´m at the police station. I´m going to be interrogated by cop Soto.
-It´s unbelivable to think that you wer surprised by a lion, you should be horrorified!
-I am! I was eating pizza, my children were having a nice time, but then, i looked to the window and saw a big male lion.
-Wow, i´ll always be surprised by this story, i just can´t believe it.
-Now I have to go, i´m being called for the conversation with the police, see you later, thanks for the call!
-You´re welcome Karen. Now, with the weather, you´re listening Radio Cooperativa.
Very good report, Clara! I liked the idea of including an interview in the report.
ReplyDeleteJust a few mistakes:
gentTLEment / listen TO / calling the / werE
look AT
Hello everybody, and welcome back again to "News Now", to hear today's news. Yesterday, we received a very interesting call from a listener. Kate, a seventeen year old, was alone at home when she heard a weird noise. She was really nervous because it seemed like the noise wouldn't stop anytime soon. She tried to call her parents but both phones weren't answered. She decided to do something to find what was causing the noise so she went outside to the backyard. Her dog had been sleeping all day long, but was now really excited, jumping everywhere. The noise was freaking her out. It wasn't a pretty noise, it was kind of a whimper. She tried to get closer to the noise. Suddenly, her dog runned to a bush and started waving his tail. When she went near the bush, she heard someone whimpering and crying. She dicovered then, that the whimpering was coming from a little boy. He was sitting on the grass while the dog was comforting him. She took the kid inside and called the police. The police arrived, and told her that the boy had been missing for almost two days, after his aunt lost him in the woods. As a reward for her bravery, the police decided to offer her a prize. The prize will be awarded to her in two weeks by the president. I'm sure this experience will be remembered by everyone for a long time! We really hope you all enjoyed this report, If you have a story to share just call us and we'll be happy to hear you!
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DeleteAmanda, very good report. But what about the Passive?
DeleterAn
Welcome to the BBC news at one, it’s eleven o’clock in the morning in London and a lot of people is arriving to the Pink Floyd concert at Wembley stadium. The concert starts at 10 pm but Pink Floyd fans want to be here as early as possible to have the best sits. The concert will be opened by a British band called “The bones”, after that, comes what everyone is waiting for, Pink Floyd. Here is a fan, we’ll interview him:
ReplyDelete-Hi, we’re BBC news, what’s your name?
-Hi, I’m Nicholas Parker, I’m really exited to hear Pink Floyd.
-Why do you like Pink floyd?
-I like Pink Floyd because the guitar is always well played.
-Have you ever been before on a Pink Floyd concert?
-Yes, 40 years ago, I saw Pink Floyd in Manchester. In 1980 the band had all its members, the guitar was played by David Gilmour, the drums were played by Nick Mason, the bass was played by Roger Waters, but Richard Wright woke up sick the morning of the concert, so in the concert the keyboards were being played by another person.
-You’re welcome Nicholas, now we still in BBC news seeing the weather report…
Great report, MartĂn!
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ReplyDeleteGood evening everyone, and welcome again to ENERGY radio. Today we are going to talk about the breaking news of the moment. Yesterday in the afternoon a man named James Volt, was found near the Thames. But he was turned into a pickle! Today morning, this man was asked: “Why are you a pickle?” And he replied: “I have been eating vegetables my entire life, and I always wanted to know how they felt." The pickle hasn’t been released by the police yet. At the moment we are not aware how he turned himself into this kind of vegetable. But some witnesses have testified that: “A very tall and strange child left a Green thing at the edge of the river near 9 am.” What does that means? We don’t know yet, any update about this case will be delivered as soon as posible here at the radio.Stay tuned! The next song was being asked by our audience for such a long time. Right now, the enrgy radio is playing for you “Super freak” by Rick James…
ReplyDeleteAlmudena
Excellent report and use of the Passive Voice Amudena!
DeleteWell done!
Good morning to all our dear listeners and welcome to a new edition of our news program
ReplyDelete'' The newest news ''. Today we will dedicate ourselves to talk about the extraterrestrial sighting that happened yesterday in the commune of La Reina. A few days ago, people in La Reina reported that a cougar had appeared in the streets, but that was only the first of many strange sightings that have occurred in the last days. People have seen cows, giraffes, zebras, and even gorillas, and some houses were destroyed by the animals, but yesterday the strangest thing happened, the landing of an UFO was witnessed by hundreds of citizens of Santiago. The aliens were not well recognized and left the earth quickly, but we are all scared of a second UFO or an attack, even when the president has said that the country will be defended by the best army in the world.
Is all this related to the covid-19 virus or maybe this year is destined to be the end of the world? This story will be continued soon and we will be reporting everything that happens in the following days.
This was ''The newest news'' and remember, stay home to stay safe!
Excellent work, TomĂĄs!!
DeleteLa Reina area or district
Hello and welcome to chile least listened radio with a total of thirteen people around the country listening at this moment. today we have a weird case, where a woman was driving to a zoo, when she was attacked by a group of monkeys that had recently escaped from a truck of jungle animals. The case was recorded by a local man who saw some minutes ago the doors of the truck open while the police was being called by a friend that was with him. The woman was rescued by the two guys before the police arrived and she escaped unharmed, but the car was destroyed. The company of the zoo was informed about the situation and the missing animals which include a group of monkeys, two gazelles, a zebra and a lemur. The only two animals that stayed inside the truck was a one month crocodile and his mother.
ReplyDeleteSantiago hartmann
Very good news report, Santiago! Congrats!
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Good evening, this is John Jonah Jameson, and welcome to ABC News.
ReplyDeleteYesterday afternoon, Arthur Leigh Allen, the prime suspect in the zodiac killer murders, was arrested at 6:30 p.m.
He is attributed the murder of 5 people and the attempted murder of 2 others,
His trial will be held next Tuesday at 3 p.m.
in the Riverside County Superior Court.
The trial will be broadcasted by BBC News.
In other news, today at noon, 10 million protective masks and 150 million bottles of hand sanitizer were donated by Bill Gates to help fight the Coronavirus pandemic.
Finally, the premiere of the new movie "A quiet place 2" is being postponed until April 2021 due to the massive Coronavirus outbreak.
Remember to stay at home and to wash your hands
Stay tuned for more information and thank you for choosing ABC News.
Maite RodrĂguez
Excellent writing, Maite!
DeleteWell done!
Good evening, ladies and gentlemen and welcome back to Topisucio's radio. Today we're having an especial guest called Federico Burgos, and he's going to talk about mountain bike races . Last saturday Fede participated in the most important mountain bike race in the country. Each of the competitors had high expectations but they couldn't do anything since the race was won by Burgos. His students from the cycling school where he teaches came in very good positions. Of the winners of the sub 16 category, two competitors were trained by himthe awards ceremony was at the mapocho station. This iconic place was built in 1912 and is characterized by being linked to sporting events. Oh, they are telling me that our guest is coming, so we look forward to it, with We are the champions by Queen, for our champion. This is Topisucio's radio.
ReplyDeleteMagdalena Rodriguez
Good work, Magdalena. However, the Passive Voice must be more used.
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