Dear 4M students 👋,
In this section, you will share your texts about "Do's and Don'ts of the school trip: A helpful guide for 3M". 😊
Remember to fulfill all the criteria given in your handout and I'll be reading your texts. I'll also share the link with your friends from 3M so they can get some tips about this important trip that they will have soon.
Enjoy and leave your texts in the comments with your name. 👍👍
In this section, you will share your texts about "Do's and Don'ts of the school trip: A helpful guide for 3M". 😊
Remember to fulfill all the criteria given in your handout and I'll be reading your texts. I'll also share the link with your friends from 3M so they can get some tips about this important trip that they will have soon.
Enjoy and leave your texts in the comments with your name. 👍👍
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ReplyDeleteFirstly, I would say that the most important part is that you have fun and learn as much as possible. Being that said, you should try to sleep as much as you can. You must eat well, even if it means spend a few extra euros per day. Try to keep your suitcase light, you won’t need that much clothes. At all times you have to follow the teachers’ instructions, is the easiest way to avoid troubles. Don’t overthink, you shouldn’t worry about plans while you’re with the teachers. You must not be noisy at night, all people need to sleep and your roommates will appreciate it. Finally, you have to be grateful with those that make this trip possible.
ReplyDeleteLucas viada
DeleteNice job, Lucas. It was a good text.
DeleteThere are some things that we could improve, though. For example: "even if it means spend" --> "even if it means SPENDING"... Also, remember that clothes are countable, so you don't say "much clothes", you say "many/ a lot of clothes". And finally, the subject IT, remember that some sentences start with it like in this example "...the teachers' instruction, (IT) is the easiest...".
Overall, great pieces of advice to your friends in 3M.
Miss Carla
The School trip is a one in a life time experience; all of you´re very lucky. Now I’m will give you a few advices and recommendations. First of all you must enjoy the travel as much as you can, second, you need to buy good winter clothes, I personally recommend do not use several layers of clothing because the museums are always overheated, so the recommendations is wear a first layer and a really good parka. You must follow the instructions that the teachers says and you have to eat as well as you can. For the other side you mustn’t consume any type of illegal drugs or alcohol during the travel. You shouldn´t be irresponsible with your stuffs. You oughtn’t to sleep less than eight hours, and the last thing is that you mustn´t lose your time in the museums, pleas enjoy and learn as much as you can!
ReplyDeleteMatías Ortiz
DeleteGreat pieces of advice, Matías... I think you learnt a lot from this experience and surely you will take into consideration these recommendations in the near future when you travel again to Europe.
DeleteI'd like to comment some sentences that need revision:
"I’m will give you a few advices" --> "I WILL give you SOME advice"
"...enjoy the travel" --> "...enjoy the TRIP" (travel is a verb, not a noun)
"I personally recommend do not use" --> "I personally recommend (you) NOT TO use"
"...be irresponsible with your stuffs" --> "...be irresponsible with your STUFF" (stuff is uncountable)
But in general, you did an excellent job!
Miss Carla
I Will give you some advices for the school trip from my experience. Always you have to follow the instructions of the teachers, it’s very important to keep a specific order. Always you should try to be tidy, so everything becomes easier to you. You must have a good behavior and be in solidarity with your classmates and teachers, you will contribute to a good coexistence. And the thing that you have to be very careful are your personal documents.
ReplyDeleteYou should never leave the group, if it is your first time being in Europe it is very easy to get lost. You don’t have to be intolerant because you can make the stay there very unpleasant. You shouldn’t carry yor suitcase full, you don’t want to have no space for your purchases. And finally, you mustn’t carry only cards, it is absolutely necessary to carry cash.
Luar Meira
DeleteExcellent use of language, Luar, congratulations. Your text offers great pieces of advice that I'm sure your friends from 3M will appreciate.
DeleteI would only say that you have to be careful with this that "Advice" is uncountable, so you say: "some advice, a piece of advice, etc".
But excellent job!
Miss Carla
The first thing you need to know, and the most important thing, is that your identity card and passport must be up to date. They can’t expire within 3 months later you go to France.
ReplyDeleteAnother important tip, if you can, wash your socks and underwear every night in the shower, so you don’t have to pay for a washing machine. However, if you need to go to a laundry share the washing machine with your friends so each have to pay 5 euros and not 20 euros. It is the best thing to do.
In the night, you should buy your lunch for the next day because probably you won’t have time the next day. There’ re a lot of cheap food, like sandwiches, so you should buy those. Also, you must buy snacks because you spend a lot of hours without eating.
You must carry an umbrella and you have to bring at least two pairs of shoes and a waterproof coat.
Have a good trip!
Valentina Castro, 4° Medio A.
Excellent job, Valentina. The use of language was flawless, congratulations.
DeleteThe pieces of advice you give to the 3M students are really relevant and easy to do. Good job!
Miss Carla
During the school trip, there are rules that you have to follow in order to enjoy and be safe during. First of all, France is a cold country, so you should pack warm clothes. The pre established rules can be very cuestionable, but under no circumstances you should go against them. The days in europe are exhausting, so you should try to sleep as much as you can to get some good rest. Remember, the rooms are shared, you don’t have to wake your roommates if they don’t ask you, unless the teachers tell you to. You might be tempted to, but you mustn’t drink alcohol or consume drugs. Walking all day is tiring, you must eat all you can (it’s also a rule, so don’t skip meals). Don’t be rude to the staff at the hotels, they are very kind people. Finally, you shouldn’t bother the teachers as they are busy trying to keep you safe and give you a Good experience.
ReplyDeleteExcellent text, José Manuel, it is well written and well explained. Congratulations.
DeleteI would pay attention, though, to the spelling of "QUESTIONABLE", but that's all. Great job!
Miss Carla
First of all, I would like to tell you that this school trip is a very unique experience. Here are somes tips you should know. You must listen to your teacher carefully and follow their instructions, this is very important to avoid problems. An other advice i would give is that you should try out local food. Something you should’t do is going outside with wet hair because you could get sick. You musn’t do drugs because it is not allowed. You won’t need to carry a camera if you take your phone with you. You have to respect the time given to get to bed and also you need to wake up on time because if you don’t you could miss breakfast. And finally you don’t have to forget your money anywhere because is the most important thing.
ReplyDeleteGreat pieces of advice, José. Good job.
DeleteI would mind the spelling of some words: Shouldn't, Mustn't.
Another important thing is that "Advice" is uncountable, so you say: "some advice, a piece of advice".
Overall, great job!
Miss Carla
The first tip i would give to the 3M students is to shower at night that way you can get more sleep and rest more after the long and hard days. The second tip is to only wash your clothes when you have a lot of dirty laundry. The third tip is that breakfast is around 7-9 so you ought to wake up around 7 but i would suggest to wake up early so you can really enjoy breakfast. Fourth tip, don't spend a lot of money of food, because is better to buy stuff that you like or for your family than to buy expensive food. Fifth tip, watch your belongings when you're at a museum or somewhere public so you don't forget them or so that they don't get stolen. Sixth tip, really enjoy the museums because there are some really cool ones and you will want to remember them. Seventh tip, take a lot of photos, i didn't take that many photos and i regret it so really, take a lot of photos and if you can use a good camera not your phone's camera.
ReplyDeleteAndrés Giaretti
Excellent job, great tips for the 3M students!
DeleteMiss Carla
Last year, I went to the school trip and it was a very nice experience so there are some tips for you to enjoy it as much as you can. First, you must eat well because it is unpleasant being hungry while you walk and do the activities. You have to avoid being cold because it isn´t a good moment to get sick. You mustn´t disobey the teachers because they can remove your free time. you ought to make a big playlist with music you don't know, music is always a good mate. you don’t have to carry a lot of clothes in the suitcase because you can wash it in your room. You will need two pairs of shoes because it can rain at any time. You should try to put attention to the guides always. And very important, have fun!
ReplyDeleteBruno Bello
Hi 3M students! I will give you some tips for the school trip. For this trip you don't have to carry on a lot of clothes, remember you can wash clothes. You need to wear warm clothes like gloves, scarf and hat. When you have to wash yours clothes, share a washing machine with friends, it will be cheaper! You must buy snacks, you'll spend a lot of energy during the day and if you don't eat you could feel sick. You need to wear comfortable and waterproof shoes. You should try to sleep as much as possible and you have to respect MIJE's hours of silence, everyone wants to rest. Finally, you should try to take advantage of this opportunity to meet your classmates better and to form stronger friendship whit people you don't know.
ReplyDeleteSofía Egaña