Dear all,
Here you will post your text about all of those wonderful live experiences you've had in either a concert or any other place.
Please mind your vocabulary as this is an educational space and everybody can see it.
I'm looking forward to reading your stories!
Good luck!
Live experience in a recital from U2.
ReplyDeleteIn 2017 i went with my dad to a U2 recital. I have to say that i will never forget seeing all the audience and fans in the stadium, it was a lot of people. I regret not having bought a shirt for the remember, in the interval, i decided to buy a hamburger and a drink, in that moment my dad told me to enjoying the moment and the opportunity that we were having. In the "extra time", the group told us to listen the last song, the best song. Finally i decided to save the tickets in my wallet. I' m counting this to remember the best recital i' ve ever been to, is the best story that i have for this homework, also i' m happy to having saved videos and records of the concert, i can remember it perfectly.
Live experience in the NBA
ReplyDeleteIn 2016 i went with my dad to a Miami Heats VS Cleveland Cavaliers NBA match. I'll never forget the energy of the stadium and the city on that night. I remember as soon as the game started LeBron hit a dunk that made all the arena silent (we were in Miami). It was a pretty tight game and Miami won in the fourth quarter. This memory makes me remember how much I used to enjoy basketball and also is one of yhe best experiences that I had had in my life
Lucas V
DeleteExcellent text and live experience, Lucas! I enjoyed reading your story and it doesn't have grammar issues. I would probably use more punctuation marks, but in general, it's a nice text.
DeleteMiss Carla
My best live experience was when for the first time I went to Lollapalooza with friends in 2018. I really enjoy going to this festival, it's a super opportunity to watch amazing singers from all over the world doing their best performance and I remember having the best time of my life watching my favourite artists, like Kygo, Mac Miller, Chance the rapper and others, so close to the stage, beacuse I managed to be in the first row, so I really felt like a super fan between all the crowd. I love having all this memories, specially when it was that day my seventeen birthday, so I hate losing this year for go to a new concert or celebrate a good brithday, because of the coronavirus. Also, some moments weren't perfect, like the electronic stage, because I can´t stand so many spectators in a close space like the Movsitar arena, so I couldn't breathe well. In conclusion, I'm looking forward to having an experience like this again.
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In 2017 I went to Lollapalooza with some friends. We went for 3 days. Someone advised us to go on the subway, so we did, it was much easier. When we arrived, we had to show our tickets, and then we could enter O'Higgins Park. The last day, I remember seeing a lot of people running. We ask someone to tell us what was happening. The programme changed at the last minute and all the audience or fans were running the get in first row for the new spectacle.
The stages were so far from each other, we tried to be on time for all the concerts but finished being late for all of them.
I miss going to concerts with my friends. We planned to go to many concerts, but now we can’t. We promise to go to some concert when it is all finished.
Valentina Castro 4 Medio A
In 2017 i went to a Bruno Mars concert with Amanda Grau, we were very excited. My mom bought the tickets and we went with her. We were fans of him, and that is why we bought some bandanas that said his name on them. Well, my mom was driving to the National Stadium so we could find Amanda. We show our tickets so we can be able to enter to the stadium. We were watching the stage all time, but first another band had to show up. Finally when Bruno Mars showed up, we were very happy, we were singing all the songs and, of course we were dancing too. We were having so much fun. I loved that experience and i love to see him again in concert.
ReplyDeleteValeria Saavedra. 4 Medio A
The last year, I went to to the charly garcia concert at the movistar arena, that was the last concert I could go to. I bought the tickets a couple of months ago because they were finished in less than a day. I choose to go in metro and I spend a long time waiting for it. The concert was epic, the audience was so crazy and the arena was completely full of fans. going to that recital was like fulfilling a dream for me, I think that was the last time he was going to come to do a concert because he is very old. I recommend listening to his music.
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DeleteIn 2015 i went to a concert of DNCE, I must say it was incredible, people jumping all excited with the songs, I think I will never forget that great night with my best friend, we went together. There was a break where with my best friend we could go to eat and drink something since we were very excited and we took advantage of resting for a short time, after that we continued singing and dancing together with all the people, that night was unforgettable and I am really grateful to have been able to attend the best night of my life, from such a fantastic group.
ReplyDeleteExcellent job, Benja. I don't know the band but if you enjoyed it so much, it must be good.
DeleteI don't have grammar comments but I would like to see more punctuation in your text, it looks like a veeeeery long sentence.
Miss Carla
In 2017 I went to see Pedro Aznar with my parents and my sisters. That was a fantastic experience, because in my family we are all fans. The movistar arenas was full and the show was incredible. During the concert Aznar starting speaking telling stories and jokes, he rememberd the times when he played with Charly Garcia and it was really funny. It impressed me to see Aznar and compare him with his music partners because he looks much younger than the others.
ReplyDeleteExcellent job, Jose. I don't know the artist that you mentioned here, but I will look for him so I can see how good he is.
DeleteNo grammar comments at all, great job!
Miss Carla
In 2013 I went to my first concert. I invited a friend to go with me. The artist was Miley Cyrus, i was a fan of her. We decided to buy the tickets months in advance so as not to miss the concert. When the day came, I was very nervous. My mom hate being late so she took us to the Movistar very early. The concert started and I was very happy to hear Miley sing live. I forgot to bring my camera so I couldn't take any photo of the show, but I remember having a very good time. We enjoy singing and dancing all the songs. We promised to go to another concert together but it never happened.
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DeleteI've never liked football that much. I used to see some games in TV and that whas it, But
ReplyDeleteone day, one of my favorite uncles came to my house with tickets for a game between Colo Colo and U. de Chile. While driving towards the stadium, you could feel the tension between both team's fans. People fought each other with sticks or rocks. When we entered the stadium, they broke a box office and it got set on fire. Before the start of the game, the referees thought of cancelling the game, but it went on. The crowd was screaming all the time. there were yells and insults of the time. I was so hyped that i decided to join the fight with some bad words. My uncle got mad at me for swearing, but that didn't stop me. I decided to throw some rocks,but my uncle stopped me, and made me realize that throwing rocks is bad. the match was going great, good play from both teams, it went into overtime, and Colo Colo won. when the final whistle came in, the noise of the spectators was so much that I couldn't hear anything. After all that, my passion for football appeared inside me. Now I go to every game, and try to buy all the merch that i can from my favorite team, being a football fan gave me a purpose in my life. Going to that game with my uncle wasn't what i wanted, it was what i needed.
AGUANTE ALBO CAMPION
DeleteDear José Manuel,
DeleteI really enjoyed your text, you have a way with words to make something simple very funny and entertaining.
I'm glad you now enjoy football and that you actually have a favourite team. I'm not a football enthusiast, but I agree with the person who said "Aguante albo campeon", that comment plus your text was "the strawberry to the cake".
No big comments in terms of grammar, just remember that when referring to TV, you use the preposition ON.
Miss Carla
In October of 2018, a group of a few friends and I went to the "Cosquin Rock" the recital took place on the Movistar Arena. We arrange to meet in the metro station "Parque O´Higgins" all went well until the entrance when one of my friends had a problem with his ticket, he forgot to bring it. We ask the closes guard for help, he suggests going to ask the box office for a solution. When we get there they offer to sell us an extra ticket, but we refuse to pay for another. Fortunately, a kind seller manages to solve the situations and with only the ID of my friend was capable of printing another ticket, he was great with us, he even gave us a paper with the full programme of the day and he also persuades us to buy a t-shirt of the event. After all, we finally could enter with the rest of the crowd and enjoy a lot of great performances during that weekend.
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In 2015 I went to a Copa America match because my godfather invite us (me and my father). That was the match in which Chile defeated Uruguay and qualified for the final. I remember that we were very cold because it was the middle of winter and we were shouting songs with all the chilean fans until mauricio isla scored a goal in the 81st minute increasing the score in favor of chile and taking chile to the final when he makes that goal all the audience stand up starting to celebrate because it only left 9 minutes and the extra time and it is a game that i will never forget because it was the first game that i went to see the national team
ReplyDeleteOnce, I went to a concert in the National Stadium in Santiago, the concert was Queen's but oviously wothout Freddie Mercury but with Adam Lambert, a really really good singer. I remember being on the court, near the stage, it was so exciting. I went with all my familly and then we went to eat something. When the concert started, the whole audience started screaming and singing. We went to the concert because my little brother was really fan of the band. It was very funny spending time with my familly that way. At that time I was a little short, I would like to see better the show, but my dad put me on his shoulders for a while and I could see everything. I remember finding Adam really handsome jajajaja an I still think that. My big brother was helping my little brother to see better when suddenty they both fell to the ground, nothing happened to them but we were laughing a lot seeing what had happening. At the end of the concert, we were all very excited, it was an incredible experience. When we left the stadium, the crowd was very large and I got lost for a moment. I remember being very scared but I found my family quickly. When we got home we forgot to turn off the car lights and the next day it was without battery, but since it was Saturday it didn't matter very much. This concert is something that I will remember all my life. Being with my family, watching a historical band and sharing that beautiful moment, I something I never want to forget.
ReplyDeleteClara Vivanco, 4º Medio A.
In 2011 (i´m not really sure), when i was little my mom and i went to see Shakira´s live concert. I was a big fan of her, and still. It was one of the most exciting moments of my life and i couldn´t believe it. I remember crying a lot because i was in the last seats and Shakira was like a little dot. In the interval my mom tried to calm me down but i kept crying. The audience were screaming very loud so i don´t enjoy listening the concert so much. But i felt in love just seeing her dancing in the huge screen. Also I felt very lucky for being there.
ReplyDeleteWow, you saw Shakira live! That's pretty awesome, Rita. I hope you can dance like her, she's truly amazing when dancing and, of course, when singing.
DeleteNice job in terms of grammar, good job!
Miss Carla